Sweet Strangers

Two different ways
With no direction, no sense,
Until you crossed my way,
When everything started to have sense.

We looked at each other
His eyes in my eyes,
My eyes in his eyes,
And that moment i wish we were infinite.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Amazing. Clap, clap, clap. :)

[anonimouss]

YOU are amazing! I dont think this poem is good enough for this web but well.. It's the first to start improving:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

now two different ways, become one way...it's the eyes, yes it's the eyes.

nice.

[Lydia Shutter]

A very romantic write. Lydi*

[anonimouss]

Yes haha, thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Pen on...:)

[anonimouss]

Please comment, i would like to know your different opinions. Thank you!