what if

My thoughts circle round and round like the needle of a compass.
But my mind is still in twists,
When I think of the times we coulda shared a simple kiss.
Your hearts in the right place,
but it's vacant. Abandoned by the tenant called emotion looking for a less colder space.
But lies and deception loved the taste,
So it was brief... Simply an open and shut case.
I see the look in your face.
Denying my verbal proclamation.
I can see you shaking..
My mind's the dj, my mouth the transmitter and my body the radio station.
I know what you been facing.
You know you're conflicting.
What we got is a "what if" situation.
I could sometimes picture you saying baby save me.
But then I tear that picture up and think why would she crave me.
Maybe,
All we can do is wait and see.
Before we drownin this conflicting sea.

Reviews

[GONE]

"Abandoned by the tenant called emotion looking for a less colder space." is a fantastic line! I also like the final couplet very much. You captured the "what if" very well in this piece. Anyone can relate to it, and that's what makes a poem work. Thanks for sharing.

[nenakris]

Thank you so much for your kind comment savageheart, I appreciate it.

[lovergirl]

i simply loved it with no other words to say this is such a lovely ,full of emotions and feelings piece and i related to it ;) thank you for sharing

[nenakris]

Thank you so much for your kind words.