A song I wrote. (: *Not full song.*

A song I wrote. (: *Not full song.*

A Story by BrokenChildren
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It's a little edgy, Not my best work probably. Please review.. Thank you.. It's not a full song..

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 These walls they're enclosing, Oh, These walls are on their way to closing.
And here I am! Oh, here I am, won't you save me? give me the time of day.
Sing off the names, and close the curtain, Oh, won't you save me? save me the time of day.
Hey, here I am can't you hear me? the walls they are closing in on me. 
Can't you feel my heart beat? Stop, and repeat.. Saving me the time of day.

© 2012 BrokenChildren


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Added on May 10, 2012
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BrokenChildren
BrokenChildren

Council Bluffs, IA



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Setting bad examples for teens since 2000, if you know what I mean.. This is what you all get for judging us kids like this, Cheerio. Writing is my passion, it's the art I live for. Same it is to .. more..

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