One Last Time

One Last Time

By

Ann Outlaw

You're gonna kill me or hate me

Maybe both in time 

We swore it was over

But can I see you one last time

A proper goodbye is what I ask

An ode to this foolish life of crime

I still see us young and free

In our prime

Break up to make up

Extra vodka, a little lime 

The game we liked best

Like a prisoner doing time 

Can I see you tonight 

I promise, just one last time 

 

Reviews

[AYVID N]

The invitation One Last Time seems intriguing and so interesting. A lot could happen in that one last time. Perhaps, the chasm could be bridged or perhaps the bridges could be burnt forever. Either way, there would be lessons learnt and realizations made. The rhyming was great to read too.

[Tali]

Ann, love this... a this or that approach and let's face the thing. lastly Iove the extra vodka.. its just forward and forward and forwad

[Mystical Ink]

We needed that, it's better than leaving without a proper closure. Don't let anything left unsaid. I enjoyed reading this poem.

[willweb]

Here's hoping their answer is..."You can come by on one condition...that a last time never happens."
Seems these things are front and center in your mind my friend.

[Ann Outlaw]

That comment put a smile on my face today. I should take a break today 😅 thanks for the words, always!