Hormones

teenage girl, issues, growing up

I was sitting on my fathers bed, 

when he asked me what was wrong

i told him i thought about ending

he said it was normal for every teenage girl

hormones suck 

my sister came down stairs,

asked if i wanted to play "barbies"

I said sure, sure,

after i had

cried and cried and cried. 

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Yep! Been there :P But I couldn't describe it like you did! Great job!

[Pritesh]

Good job!!!!!!

[joshua deathdealer]

Well penned. You really nailed this matter here.

[Destinyxi]

I feel this poem sort of jumps from scene to scene. Doesn't really have a flow. But it has a message a few people can relate to so good job :)

[Rasputin]

So you tell your dad that you're thinking about "ending" (ending your life, presumably), and all he does is tell you that it's normal for every teenage girl to feel that way?
...That's actually pretty funny.

[Starr Mist]

Very good, I liked it. I didn't feel this way when I became a "woman" but still very good, every situatoin is unique though.

[Cree Nations]

It is hard to grow up.
I liked the poem

[TC Dunn]

oh, so sad... but I think this is an emotion that all of us have been through, and you do a wonderful job of capturing that.

[AK]

Brilliant poem. And I swear I would want it to end too... I loved the free flow, keep writing!

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol i cant help but laugh, even though it was extremely dark. A dark comedy if you will, i dont know if you inteneded that but thats how it came across to me. I can feel the emotion behind it and i really enjoyed this poem, good job