Somebody Like Me

Somebody Like Me

A Poem by Annie Rachele
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This is a poem about two people with a similar deformity with their face. They both want to be accepted, but it is not easy.

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Everyday she looked out her window
But everyday her heart filled with despair
Would she ever find someone like her?

Each chance he looked down on the street
But each chance was nothing more than a disappointment
Would he ever find someone like him?

She would hide her face from the world
Deformity was not embraced by everyone else
So she looked and waited out her window for someone just like her

He wouldn't leave his house
It was a risk set up for defeat
Yet he never stopped staring at the street for someone just like him

One day she decided looking out a window was not enough
She left, her home, her sanctuary.....her hiding spot  
Only to get terrified looks and unwelcome glances 

Finally he got enough courage to go outside
He shook with every step, but did not make it far
People whispered and some even laughed 

She did not make it back to her lonely home 
Not without running straight into a boy on the street
Her head was down and she made a quick apology 

He ran as fast as his legs would take him
But knocked down a girl, who apologized although it was not her fault
She got up to leave but he begged her to wait

The boy asked her to wait, and politely she did
Then he took her chin and held it up
But he did not look frightened or bitter 

The girl stopped and he took a step closer
He saw her face and could not help but stare
Finally he had found someone just like him

She looked into his face and smiled as best she could
A tear rolled down her face and she wiped it from her cheek
She had finally found someone just like her

They were both abnormal, some people would even say mistakes 
But to each other they were perfect
And both the girl and the boy found the one feeling they never had before....acceptance. 

© 2017 Annie Rachele


Author's Note

Annie Rachele
If you spot a mistake anywhere, that would be helpful so I could fix it. Otherwise I hope you like it! It is supposed to be more of a story poem, but let me know what you think!

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Beautifully written and so touching..lovely form, flow and cadence. “Somebody Like Me” is a poignant and compelling ballad of courage, empathy and acceptance. Brava Annie!.


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Annie Rachele

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! I am glad you liked it

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