I Wonder Why She Wonders

just a little poem about my friends sister. She's in high school and still very very nice too me n my friend despite our younger years.

I used to watch my sister, 

Stare and watch the sky.

And through her eyes I could see

Her dreams of soaring high.

And even to this day,

When I start to picture

That far-away look in her eyes,

I wonder why she wonders,

I wonder why she dreams,

I wonder what she dreams about

As simple as it may seem.

Author's Note

nothing much really, not meant to be deep, or balanced or touching, just a simple little poem.

Reviews

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Beautiful. Deep. Emotional. Love it.

[r]

This is really sweet, and I love the last line "as simple as it may seem". Wonderful. :)

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I wonder why she wonders,
I wonder why she dreams,
I wonder what she dreams about
As simple as it may seem.

I really was amazed by these words here. I enjoyed your write.

[x]

When ever you see that wondering look in anothers eyes one is always struck by the mystery of their thought...where do they go..what they do when they are there and who is it that so distracted them from reality.
Day dreams are what sustain us.

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"And even to this day,
When I start to picture
That far-away look in her eyes,
I wonder why she wonders,
I wonder why she dreams,
I wonder what she dreamed about
As simple as it may seem."

{so sweet--a beautiful poem}

james:-)

[Leanne Conway]

Beautiful! I love it!

[Closed Account]

I really like this! it's just like you said, simple, but it has a lot of meaning. You've done a great job with this! :)