City Lights

City Lights

A Poem by Annie N.
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My very very first haiku. Forgive me if it sucks, I can't seem to get the hang of these things!

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Night in the city
glittering lights swallow up
the resting silence

© 2010 Annie N.


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Annie N.
If it's not a properly written haiku, help me!!!

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It looks perfect to me.
Sweet!

Posted 13 Years Ago
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r
Beautiful!! You are so talented at writing poems!! I can't believe you're only 12, and that this is your first haiku!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago
wow beautiful! i love it! i can't believe its only your first haiku!!

Posted 14 Years Ago
WOW--Beautiful Haiku..........................................Awesome!!!

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago
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BANG!!
That is the sound of you nailing it...

Posted 14 Years Ago
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Ima
it was short yet had strong emotion.. i really liked it ...

Posted 14 Years Ago
Beautiful imagery, so .. real. I loved it. That's all I need to say.

Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow, for such a short poem, provides a lot of emotion. Good work :) *claps*

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on July 16, 2010
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