She

She

A Poem by Internet Killed TV
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She holds me, she tells me how much
I mean to her, how much she cares.

I try to breathe I try to find,
I try to search for some peace
in my mind.

Trying to breathe, trying to see,
trying to believe that I am alright.

She touches me and kisses me,
tells me she wants me.

She says it is special, she calls me
special but I don't feel anything.

Emptiness fills me.

Vacancy controls me.

I try to see, I try to breathe
but she is gone



© 2011 Internet Killed TV


Author's Note

Internet Killed TV
This has never happened to me. I got inspired when listening to Starpower by Sonic Youth.

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This reminded me of Starpower a lot. It was really good. The point of view that the poem was written in was really good. I'm sure a lot of people could feel empty, dead and lost during a situation like this.
I loved the second stanza for the some reason. It really showed what the poem is about.
Great write, Ann (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This reminded me of Starpower a lot. It was really good. The point of view that the poem was written in was really good. I'm sure a lot of people could feel empty, dead and lost during a situation like this.
I loved the second stanza for the some reason. It really showed what the poem is about.
Great write, Ann (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Internet Killed TV
Internet Killed TV

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Hello thurr c: My name is Ann Zora Dinn and no, I will not suck your dick. I'm 18 years old. I like to tease my hair and I write a lot. I often start books, but then I can never finish them. So yea.. more..

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