An Ode

Falling into the sheets.

I enter the room after a long day, look over,

and see you waiting there every diligently.

You motion me over, playfully promising

to make me forget it all. I may have messy hair,

I may have changed into a baggy t-shirt

for the night, but you always take me as

I am.

 

I climb on top of you, pulling the sheets up

past my shoulders. My eyes shut as your

gentle caress relieves my tension, soothes

my mind, and readies me for my wildest

dreams. My legs curl, toes point, and I release

myself to your pleasures.

 

Bed, I adore you, for you of all

give me what I need without question.

Author's Note

haha, trick ya? :) This was me trying to be sarcastic about hating to sleep alone.

Reviews

[zombiikillah666]

I need this with my bed. :/ haha. liked it. (:

[Devons]

Yeah, huh-huh, like, beds are coool..!!

>>Yeah! Yeah! Beds are cool! Yeah! Beds are cool!

Shut up, Beavis!!

[Sara]

lol, hilarious, you totally tricked me! i got to that last stanza and was like 'wait --- what?' good job! :D

[An owl on the moon]

You've done this so well, turning and twisting reader expectations in the best possible way. Excellent write!

[Pillow Of Winds]

Tricked me alright, very clever idea :) short and sweet

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

OMG that is quite good... never heard a bed described in such a manner... even if it was fantasy we all need that sometimes to keep reality from driving us insane. very enjoyable read.