Light Tears and Faded Love

She sat in the moonlit grass
Replaying scenes from the night before last.
Her delicate fingers pulled at the grass
And so she chose to rememer the good old days
The days when she was a girl
Way back when things were simple.

Her light, faded jeans dirtied.
But she didn't have a care, for people had changed.
He left her behind without a single thought.
Her face tightened
And the fight to hold back tears began.
The sky clapped thunder
Rain poured onto her soft blonde strands.
She still sat, her head buried in her knees.
Light tears fell
For a faded love she could no longer keep.

© 2013 Alyssa Carlstrom

Author's Note

Picture is not by me. Found on Google Images.

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Neon

I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel bad so sad! The poem's saying much itself with your great deep words. Keep smiling n hey, don't be sad! It's you who makes the world beautiful with all your scent n when you walk a sand becomes gold n an ocean damn cold so, be happy!

Keep up the great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Aahhh...........touchable........just ripped my heart.........your words are so powerful........so.impactful..........so, dominant....i just liked + loved = felt your these words......how you've made it so beautifully, it's a witches way....wow.......you' know how to write........what's an impact of writing.........you know the worth of writing........i loved here few lines........
She sat in the moonlit grass
Replaying scenes from the night before last.
Her delicate fingers pulled at the grass...................

great........these above lines are so real i'd say........tags :- moonlight, grass., delicate.......well, your words are good, just suit with your tittle no doubt.............hey.......wait...i loved here few more lines......

The sky clapped thunder
Rain poured onto her soft blonde strands.
She still sat, her head buried in her knees.
Light tears fell
For a faded love she could no longer keep..........

Beautiful write.......these lines shows how she cried, then rain fell down on her......to wash here tears.......great words..........i was lot in your poem if i truly say.........when i was reading it........i was wondering & thinking "Is that profile. pic. girl whose poem i'm reading here :-)"

Wwell, nothing to sat much.....loved it.....you've ripped my heart....i wanna give you 97.9/100....i think you are the 5th one, who's gaining my 90 +.......beautiful write.
A pat on your back from me.