Renesmee's Story

I like how detailed you went on it, it kept it very interesting and made me want to know more about Renesme's background and future and all that good jazz. A very good read and write all around

Posted 16 Years Ago

Stepheine Meyer really does need to consider writing a Renesme series. But I really enjoy your take on it and how closely you stayed to the series. I could imagine this being something she would write :).

Posted 16 Years Ago

Very enjoyable I like how everything was moving. Can't wait for more to come. Should be rather interesting.

Posted 16 Years Ago

i always thought jacob imprinting on bella's daughter was kind of weird, but you gave the story a different non-pedophile feel, which i appreciate a lot. i kind of want to go back and re-read the last book with this story in mind... thanks for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Ahhhh! I love it! wow, they are much alike, but mine is going towards a diferrent dark mystreios, oh no! kind of path....muwahahahaha! I really like this, keepp on writing her story or i just might fgo insane! thanks for reviewing my writings, i haven't been on lately so i had no idea u reviewed me that much. Keep this up, because i think it's wayyy better than mine.

Posted 16 Years Ago

I like your movement through time.

Posted 16 Years Ago