Anger

a poem about anger

Anger is cruel
Anger is harsh
It hurts not only you
But everyone else
To not feel anger
is to not feel human
Anger is a step
you have to take
to get over
the guy that left you
the annoying brother
the unkowing parent
Anger is a gift
but also a burden
to those who cant control
the anger in side them
dont let it contol you

Author's Note

ignore any mistakes. let me hear your feedback if you have any.

Reviews

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

I think this was pretty good. A little fast pace, but when reading aloud it could help express the feeling of anger. I think you could have made it a tad longer, but the feel of anger is very much alive and I, as a reader, could feel the emotion behind each line: the guy that left you, the annoying brother, the unkowing parent. Well done :]

[Your.in.my.heart]

A nice write, thank you for sharing

[Cคɾเ&#..]

I really like this...thanks for the advise. I will for sure follow it. I really like how you narrowed anger down in a universal way, so that evryone knows what anger can do...control us.

[J.Black]

"Anger is a gift
but also a burden
to those who cant control
the anger in side them
dont let it contol you"

It's true sometimes it a gift, but it's hard when the anger does turn into something controlling.
Well done