Particular Nature

I am not a mineral.

I do not perfectly repeat.

I am code

over and again.

Endlessy imperfect

a flawed copy of myself one minute ago.

I am a particle,  I am a wave.

Neither and

erupting between orbits within my

one and only Atom.

Reviews

[Mila]

A very nice testament to the human scientific and ethical perspective. I can honestly say that you took a very creative approach to a common subject of written prose and poetry. You literally made a popular subject matter your own, and I commend you for that. Well done!

[Anne Goldmann]

Thank you Mila. I had no idea how popular this subject matter was! Thank you for that insight. And thank you for your commendation. I look forward to reading you as well!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very creative, thought provoking poem! Excellent writing.

[Lauriegirl]

I found this write to be very intriguing and thought-inspiring. very good job

[Anne Goldmann]

Thank you so much for reading! I will find time to read some of you too.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

All of this from the picture above I presume...yet let's throw in creative thought process in there --- to give this merit...I liked how you had me glancing with my eyes --- as I took this verse in...the usage of mineral...code...particle and ultimately atom...quite a bit of impact within a very short amount of wordage...

[Anne Goldmann]

Thank you Glen. Actually, I had taken this photo a while ago and when I was looking for a suitable photograph for this poem I refound it. Happy chance!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I see...you're welcome...and wholla this came into being...

[Amber Lily]

It's simple but impactful. Aside from the scientific factor, it shows how one being an atom can affect other peoples lives. Well done :)

[Anne Goldmann]

Thank you Amber. It's nice to feel like our atoms affect other atoms in such a huge universe.

[MomzillaNC]

Whoa! Very cool little poem!

[Anne Goldmann]

Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for reading!

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.