Breath

Your gentle hands dressed in affection
tenderly cups my cheeks, 
Dark eyes telling me wonderous stories that 
your inspired feelings have woven. 
I am a child still, but now blessed with the depth
from Love. 

Reviews

[Cid]

Review :
The real feelings of love about love're seemed into the forms of your poetic words. It's a great way to let the feelings of heart go outside ...with the great artistry of poem!

Rating : 100/100!
Note : "I loved this short poem!"

[Annalisa]

Thank you very much! Means a lot that someone's read it, let alone loved it! Thank you :)

[Cid]

Your welcome!
Really!! lol
Why you just keep yer poems to yourself?????????
your very good at writing and you should let everybody know about your talent!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I love poems like these,scrupulous and very vivid well done!!

[Annalisa]

Thank you so much! Gosh, I'm not used to anyone reading my poems, let alone enjoying it. :) It really does mean a lot, Thank you!! :)