Well, as the Greek word says, dusphoros - hard to bear ... dissatisfaction is a state of consciousness, so to be aware is the most important thing. I always feel dominated by my dysphoria, like I had it the last weeks, ill and paralyzed by illness, but it's over, and I am home again.
This poem deals with writer's block, very poetic and pretty.
The idea of polished or rough-edged is an ironic one. Given your theme, I even wonder if "finner" is an intentional typo. ;-)
The most riveting aspect of this polish vs. rough-edgedness is the raw physicality of fingers bleeding on the letters, like some desperado Braille press. That is also a further enjoyable paradox -- fingers rendered rough through some impossible attempt at verbal polish.
Your title refers to a state of unhappiness, but I find the irony of polish and rough edge even more prominent.
i like the image of sanding used to show the work that goes into refining a piece of writing. and also the thought that no matter how much work is put into that refining, there is often the feeling that more should be done. nicely written. i enjoyed it a lot.
Well, as the Greek word says, dusphoros - hard to bear ... dissatisfaction is a state of consciousness, so to be aware is the most important thing. I always feel dominated by my dysphoria, like I had it the last weeks, ill and paralyzed by illness, but it's over, and I am home again.
This poem deals with writer's block, very poetic and pretty.
This is as fine as an emery board. You made your reader feel every word in this wonderful piece and the form used added to its excellence. Great work, I am glad I stopped by to read.
Very visceral and almost physical. I can feel those words you speak of. It's such a moving poem with the emotions all too familiar to all of us, yet you allow it to reach a whole new level. Awesome work.
I like the sanding idea very much and the tactility of touching the words is great. I think writing is very physical and visveral. So I love the fusion of blud and ink! Great stuff. Ach, the minds touch!!!! Love that bit. And *smiles wryly* at self-depreciatory wit of finer sandpaper.
I landed on my feet with this one as I enjoyed it very much. It's clever, and has truth in it as we all know we can do better.