A deadly night

To my uncle, wherever he might be

When it took you away

I saw the life leave your eyes

I started to sway

You had been so wise

A year has passed

I still lay in the wake of sadness

It went by so fast

Creating all this madness

To this day

You wander in my mind

The world has gotten less gray

You had been, so kind.

Reviews

[Azurel]

This poem is worth reading.

[anna]

Thank you. :)

[Azurel]

Don't be so polite like that~

[anna]

what what what

[Josh Dollar]

Thank you for sharing. I lost me grandfather a little of a year ago. This really relates to all who have lost some one dear the them.

[anna]

I felt like expressing how it feels, so I wrote this. I'm glad I captured it correctly and that others can relate. Thank you

[anna]

I love the way this poem shows how the feeling of missing those that have passed can never actually go away. It can lessen, but it stays with you forever. This is a great way of describing the struggle a person can go through.

[anna]

Thank you. I tried. :)

[Enigma]

This is powerful and speaks to anyone who's suffering from any bit of loss. I can deeply relate and I give this two thumps up.

[anna]

Thank you Shay. :)