Playing

I'm as a child
Who is playing in this
Game of life
With a smile
Sometimes I cry too
When I lose
Something I love so much
But after a while
I smile again
When I see you came
To me
again
My gentle man.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. We can get lost. Need those special people to show us the way to be happy again. The story was very good in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

Short and sweet the only thing wrong is (came should be come) otherwise great job well done.

[Tori Adams]

Very nice poem. Short, sweet, and well-written. I liked how it wasn't dark or overly joyous. Great job!

[Jibey]

A charming piece, light but appealing...