The Ocean

With all the bad, there is always good:)

drowning
gasping for air as my head is pulled under forceful waves
powerful and persuasive as they push me under
flailing my arms, trying to break through
suddenly tumultuous waves go tranquil
the raging war has stopped and im able to breathe
the vast ocean so peacefully beautiful
everything at a stand still, a dreamy state
in times of turmoil, there will always be contentment

Author's Note

honest feedback:) I really want to improve as a writer so constructive crictisim would be appreciated :)

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

I love the ocean, it is so peaceful and beautiful. Enjoyed your write here, so nicely penned. Amazing!