Failing At First

Failing At First

A Poem by A. Garcia Sagarra
"

Trying might mean failing, even though jumping means falling, you can stand up. You will have jumped and fell, but flied in between.

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We are determined 
to do something,
just like a baby 
is determined to walk.

As our first tries come,
we keep falling,
everytime harder,
and a voice in our minds
tells us to give up.

At first, we ignore it.
We trust ourselves,
but as we still fail,
it gets louder.

We reach a point,
where we feel useless,
anything will make it better,
we think we can't do it.

Our self-steem lowers,
our self-confidence,too.
There isn't strenght in our soul.
There isn't a worthy goal.

We just have to stand up again,
even if we're tired and bruised,
even if the light doesn't dazzle your eyes,
it's still at the end of the tunnel.

© 2013 A. Garcia Sagarra


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A. Garcia Sagarra
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So much truth in those wonderful words and experiences...Thank you for sharing...:).........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on November 18, 2013
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A. Garcia Sagarra
A. Garcia Sagarra

Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain



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