a poet's poem

A white paper without any dark spot

Standing before me

Asking to paint me

With the colors of yours dream

Full of emotions of your heart

Please create the world on me

I have a soul and the conscience too

I will be the shadow of you

Take some stars from the night sky

And little light from the sun

I will request to the moon

 Bring the dawn soon

Some drops of tears

Add you little dear

You have to believe

Make the white paper alive

Reviews

[The dark story]

"I have a soul and conscience too"…true and mind blowing. Loved how you have penned it with such strong and bright dictions and wise thoughts.
Stunning piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Knightingale]

Love this. Truly a poet's poem.
"Asking to paint me With the colors of yours dream Full of emotions of your heart Please create the world on me I have a soul and the conscience too I will be the shadow of you" That's my favorite part. So well put.
Thank you for sharing.

[Ankur Sharma]

thank you very much knightingale I am happy you liked it.

[Knightingale]

My pleasure entirely :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

The way you put your words i can explain it but its amazing. I don't know the word for it but i love it. '
Your very creative the way you write and set out your words is amazing job well done.

[Ankur Sharma]

cimmy thanks a lot for your beautiful remarks.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome anytime :)

[Quill~]

The musings for all things poetic! I love the nature of this piece. Beautiful! :)

[Ankur Sharma]

thanks you very much friend i really liked it.