the innocent heart

As a child I believed the world where every one is happy but as my understanding grew I saw one thing for me there can not be badder thing then this that is Human trafficking for prostitution.

Standing in the middle of voices

In front of lots of walking and looking eyes

Making me frightened from inside

Waiting for someone who would stand beside 

Just watching the hungry and cruel wolf around me

But nowhere to go beyond the bloody sea

I too had story of love and compassion

Ends at my soul assassination 

My world fall down

When I was found in the red town

Standing at the middle of stage

And in front of lots of hands

Just to grab the innocence of me

I am a piece going to be sold

Waiting for someone to be bold

But It was the lusty devil gonna me hold

And I was there lying on the floor

just with null feeling and abhor

Shattered thought making me grey

I was a body in the social prey

Again I am standing in the middle of voices

With The lost of faith and hopes

No one will be there to be bold and stand beside me

Crying on me believed the world alike my dream

My body is not mine any more

But  my heart is innocent and pure

I have a luck enriching destitute

Now I am a girl to be called prostitute...    

  

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

The character of the poem is in the middle of a crowd listening to others and is afraid to speak because of fear of being listened to, critized or judged.

From the following,


"My body is not mine any more
But my heart is innocent and pure
I have a luck enriching destitute
Now I am a girl to be called prostitute..."

we conclude several options.

[Ankur Sharma]

I don't know whether I succeed in trying to portrait the situation or not but int he end when I Finished I felt satisfied. Judging is my area of work it is better to left to the reader. Thanks you for your kind review Squinkla.

[Meera Krishna]

Woman in any society have to resort to jobs which demean their entire being but that's the story of a woman, scared, restless, seeking a helping hand from people around her to save herself from the demeaning agony. You expressed the mood of the protagonist so well.......nice job

[Ankur Sharma]

thank you very much meera for your kind admiration.

[Elinor Williams]

Wow, this is really good :') I really enjoyed reading this!

[Ankur Sharma]

elinor thank you appreciate that.

[Nermeen]

Amazing poem
i really like it all
it has a good topic in it :)