Let's be free

This little poem tries to figure out that we are afraid to be ourself because of others' false expectations and encourages us to be our ture self

We
Are anchored
By others' belief and false expectations
Losing our own identity.
Let's break this anchor today and live our own life .
Cause it holds us from going beyond our limits .
Cause we were given this life because we are strong enough to live it .
Cause we all are great in ourself .
Cause we all deserve the best .
So ,
Lets be free.
Lets break the anchor.
Lets move to greatness.
Lets move to our true self .

Author's Note

Please take out out mistakes ,if any .And give reviews on how can I make this better .

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked the usage of "anchor" as your theme within the lines...this gives much to the reader as an inspirational type of a verse...as for making this more of a narrative you could do this with the theme:

We
Are anchored
By others' belief and false expectations
Losing our own identity.
Let's break this anchor today and live our own life .
Cause it holds us from going beyond our limits .
Cause we were given this life because we are strong enough to live it .
Cause we all are great in ourself .
Cause we all deserve the best .
So ,
Lets be free.
Lets break the anchor.
Lets move to greatness.
Lets move to our true self .
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We anchored.
By others' belief
and false expectations
losing our own identity.
Let us break this anchor
today and live our own life.
Cause it holds us
from going beyond our limits.
Cause we given this life
because we are strong enough to live it.
Cause we all are great in ourselves.
Cause we all deserve the best.
So, let us be free.
Let us break the anchor.
Let us move to greatness.
Let us move to our true self.

This is just my personal opinion...you are the author of your work...and do as you please with your work...

[Laminators Dubai]

yup
any "RELATIONSHIP" belongs on that shore of love....and the anchor of believe...
really thoughtful and positive....
thanks for sharing and thanks for keeping our head up...

[Tom]

Yes indeed freedom of choice ! No one has the right or power to impose their views and beliefs onto anybody else, its about what the individual feels themselves as to which path they chose to go down!

Well penned Ankit, you poems always encourage strong self-belief and to have confidence in yourself and this is to be commended!

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks a ton brother for your kind reviews .

[Sami Khalil]

A very inspiring poem. Thank you for sharing...:)

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks for reviewing sami .

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...........

[Akshay Rawal]

you took my word bro..actually i was afraid of thinking to attempt for IFS since a lot of people told me that you require around 200 books to read and an additional time of 4 years.....actually i got one who supports me to go for it after 6 years ( right now i m in 11th) . if you wanted it to be too simple , then its good. and please edit the line " lets break the and anchor ". the ' and ' shoved in it is making no sense

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks a lot akshay .The 'and ' was a mistake .I am glad that this poem inspired you .I am in 12th .And remember one thing .You were given this life because you are strong enough to live it .Let others say what they want to .Listen to everyone but do only what you truely wants to do .Your brother Ankit .

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes, let's be who we are and not who we are told to be by those who often do not even know who they are! We must remain true to ourselves and be brave enough to move beyond our comfort zone!
Excellent words of advice for one to break out of the mold of "normal"!

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks a lot Sheila .You are always so nice to me .I have always tried to write as simple and inspiration as possible.Thanks a lot for reviewing .