Success

This is a poem about success.

Success don't go to quitters .
It goes to those who choose to keep going .
Many people have tried to achieve it but failed .
Because at the end of pain is success ,they might not be knowing .

It's better you close all the exits .
Let your will power take you higher .
Since only when you know ,there's no return .
You will be able to walk through fire .

They always ask for the shortcut .
That's why they are unsuccessful .
But winners choose something else
And filled with their blood and sweat ,large and mighty pools .

They ask me where is success ?
At the other side of your fear ,I replied .
You'll get your reward once you reach there .
Since you played ,from an extraordinary life you won't be denied .

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think of this poem .

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

They ask me where is success ?
At the other side of your fear ,I replied .

True, true, true words, My friend. True words.

[Laminators Dubai]

Since you played ,from an extraordinary life you won't be denied .
AWESOME!
im totally buying whatever you selling
thanks a successful write...
thanks for sharing!^^

[Ankit Mahar]

Haha .Thanks a lot glitch

[Akshay Rawal]

Nice one buddy ....this poem has a very attractive austerity and yes,who doesn't want to be successful?
Nice take indeed

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks for sending all the reviews bro .

[Akshay Rawal]

MY PLEASURE,,,,,,:D

[Saumya]

what a wonderful thought provoking poem it was:)
i completely enjoyed every word in this piece

a great advice and a wonderful poem:)
well done:)

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks Saumya .Keep writing

[Saumya]

you r welcm:)

[Sheila Kline]

Wonderful advice and encouragement to forge on until success is reached! I agree with Tom in that the order of the phrases would improve the meaning of the poem, but I am thinking you wrote the line as you did to keep the rhyme - going and knowing. With that said, perhaps you could up with another word to rhyme if that is your goal. Otherwise, I am inspired by your words!!

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks sheila .But hey I am just a beginner .But next time I will try my best to live up to your expectations .And thanks for the wonderful review .Keep writing .

[Tom]

There's a great story here Ankit, there's no free lunches out there, you have to earn them !

Just change it a bit to sound better eg.. 'It goes to those who choose to keep going
Many people have tried to achieve it but failed'

Another idea to throw into the poem is this line..' You reap what you sow (sowing)', just another possibility to expand upon and improve your poem even further!

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks a ton for you review brother .I will try my best to improve this poem and as you said ,I will try to add some new lines to it .Thanks a lot bro .

[Sami Khalil]

"Success don't( doesn't ) go to quitters .
It goes to those whose choose to keep going .
Many people tried to get it but failed .
Because at the end of pain is success ,they might not be knowing ."

Thank you for sharing your success with us...A splendid poem...:)

[Ankit Mahar]

Thanks a lot brother .

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)