That Feeling!

Remember the time when there used to be absolutely nothing to talk about and we used to chit chat for like hours? That was the loveliest time of my life. But now there are words trapped on lips struggling to rush out and all I could hear is the silence…! Initially it wouldn’t have been awkward at all… the silence… but it is now…! And then that one eye contact said it all. I know we are bound by our responsibilities but our eyes are not. I’ll love you till my last breath. You’ll know this if not by words then at least from the look of desperation in my eye.

Author's Note

Plese review, reply and rate so that I can improve.

Reviews

[West Lake Angel]

Asr, I assume that since you are in India your first language is not English. I am impressed with your English in this piece though. I enjoyed reading it. There is a word missing in the phrase "nothing to talk and we". Should it say "nothing to talk about and we"?

[asr]

Thanks Elizabeth, I will make the required correction. I am happy to read the first review... :)