Inhuman

Slithering my way into the woods...

Beyond the mysterious seas,

I turn around and see the moonlight...

Dancing on my scaly skin...

I spread my wings and take off into the darkest nights

In search for the treasures unknown...

For I am a gluttonous beast.

I breathe out the flames...

Burning in my heart, ever since the beginning of time...

I am a murderous fiend, a sadistic brute...

I’d love to see life slowly drain out of you...

So, come to me and let me put an end...

To your obnoxious existence...

I’d lure you into my den and tear you into pieces...

Come and let me dig, my teeth into your soft flesh...

All I desire for is your blood...

All I want to hear is your excruciating scream...

I’m not ashamed of my iniquity...

For I am Inhuman...

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[.Bunnie.]

^.^ Once again, child, you never cease to amaze me! You're going to make me repetitive at saying "Omigawsh I love it!" :P And well, at the sake of sounding repetitive....I loved it! LoLz.

Only thing I suggest is taking out the , in this sentence:
"Come and let me dig, my teeth into your soft flesh..."

Keep it up, Signet! :)

[Pookie]

Its a really good piece. Don't get me wrong. ITS AWESOME!!! I like it. But it has nothing to do with the contest. Nicely written though. And with the "All I want to hear is your excruciating scream..." That got me. I like that. It sent chills down my spine. And it made me see what you were talking about.

[Ich bin das Giftmä..]

I love this piece and the imagery was wonderful!