What do you do when...

A poetic description of my life.

What do you do when the ones you love..

Are the reason for the tears in your eyes?

What do you do when..

The dream you once lived for, dies?

What do you do when you start hating..

The person you still love?

What do you do when you lose..

The person you believed was sent from above?

What do you do when you feel you’re bound and chained..

When your heart desires to fly?

What do you do when you fall down..

After flying up so high?

What do you do when you gaze at the stars..

Wondering if you should love him or not?

What do you do when you’re unsure..

To be sad or happy with what you’ve got?

What do you do when you ask yourself..

If his love is true?

What do you do when..

You live a life I do??

Author's Note

Please comment if u liked it or not? Suggestions and constructive critisism welcomed!!

Reviews

[Mioki]

This was really true, and that fact is what makes it such a wonderful poem. The confusion in the poem, the questions asked, are such honest and simple questions that we all crave to be answered. The emotion was also subtly put in there, it wasn't too overpowering but blunt.

I liked the way you tied the whole poem with rhymes, it added a last touch the made this poem beautiful. I think you've got some talent for writing, I hope to see more of your work!

[Dev]

Ahh.. Nice one.. I liked it.. It's like you're asking a question but you're still trying to be rational about the situation.. well written

[deeps]

Such a emotional write here
I like it all the feelings were there to hold the
wonderful flow you have going on

[Stammers]

It reads really nicely, the idea was very well executed and it's clear the whole process was given some consideration, not just a load of random crap trying to make a poem, it all fits and belongs and it comes to something in the end. It's really good, nice job.

[Encore]

Great poem. Everyone can relate to the confusion you are going through. I loved it!

[LeeAnne]

Nice poem. This is exactly how I feel. I love the ending. Very well written. :)

[KatieDaray]

very nice poem i love it

[Piikapoka]

Its a good poem. i like the end,

"What do you do when...
-you live a life i do??"

very good :)