MOHOBBAT

A piece of Spoken words.

AAJ JISS TRAIN SE UTRA THA 

USPAR WAPAS CHADH CHUKA HUN,

MOHOBBAT MAY SHAHEED HONE

MAI WAPAS UTAR CHUKA HUN.

NAAJAANE KYUN VO MOAD ISS SAFAR KE 

AAJ BHI DARAATE HAIN,

AUR NAAJAANE KYUN HUM FIR BHI

UNPAR CHALNA CHAHAATE HAIN...

KYA VO PICHLA DARD BHUL GAYA HUN MAI?

NAHIN...

PAR SHAYAD ISS MOHOBBAT MAY KHO GAYA HUN MAI.

MAANTA HUN KI BOLA THA

KI KABHI PYAAR NAHI KARUNGA...

PAR ISKE BAARE MAY BHI MAI KUCH BURA NAHI SUNUNGA,

MOHOBBAT MAY GIRA THA..

AB MOHOBBAT SE HI UTHUNGA,

ISS TRAIN SE UTARNE KI  MAI..

AB GUZZAARISH NAHI KARUNGA.

MAANTA HUN KI ISS SAFAR MAY

KAYI BAAR MAI GIRUNGA...

PAR..

USKE LIYE ITNA TOH MAI KARUNGA,

AAKHIR MOHOBBAT MAY GIRA THA..

AB MOHOBBAT SE HI UTHUNGA.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Bohot khub...
Maanta hun ki iss safar may
Kayi baar mai girunga
Par
Uske liye itna toh mai karunga
'Mohabbat hi utni ki hai hame unse'
Aakhir mohabbat may gira tha
Ab mohabbat se hi uthunga

If you add that line I quoted, it reads better don't you think?

I really liked the feelings and the repititive lines, very deep and passionate. Keep writing and sharing more.