Crazy Love

Crazy Love

 

O one with the most wondeful eyes

Give me your heart,or give me a curse,

I'm crazy about you

I'm a carefree lover.

 

You look so innocent but you bear a heart that is black.

These lovers are going to be plundered,

They are going to end up with broken hearts

Go my love,do what you can, you I have colored.

 

Take my word for it, I'm going to hang you for this.

I'd happily accept the noose;

I'd die, if you asked me to

I'd give you my heart ,if you would scare me

Remember what I say, our hearts will be one someday.

 

Why are you standing aloof from me?

You have the cheek,

Make an excuse to embrace me

You are in the mood for mischief,

But the girl is far away.

 

You should have thought again before you came here,

Never leave again.

Joys and sorrows are but like the gust of winds

Hearts are what will always be exchanged why put obstacles?

We stop not our hearts;our hearts stops us.

 

Could someone tell us what's the truth and what is a betrayal?

This world is such a beautiful place,

That is what I think,

So beautiful are all the hues.

Reviews

[LadyLove]

I love the feeling of possession in this. That she knows how black his heart is and yet she can't tear her heart from him. To see the world as a beautiful place even with the black in it is hopeful for his love to be hers in time. Does truth or betrayal matter anymore or will knowing the difference change your feelings of the hue of black? Hmm..there's a question! You did good.

[flippyblue]

Wow! I enjoyed this poem. You did a very good job capturing the essence of the dark ( yet passionate) side of love.