Tears

I cry with the rain.

I don't want anyone

to see me like that.

 

Or, I cry myself to sleep.

That is another alternate

that I look at almost constantly,

now.

 

What gets me to this,

is a total mystery

and yet

it seems understandable,

at the moment

 

I see myself constantly

doing this

and yet I can't stop

Author's Note

should i go more on this

Reviews

[Samantha Lynn]

This exactly what I do. i don't want people to see me upset. I am the person people go to for help in bad situations so if they see me crying then that wouldn't help anyone. So I hold my tears in and cry myself to sleep pretty much every night. Sometimes it helps, but then there are days in which it just upsets me more. But I do it for all my friends. and if they are happy then I will be happy.

[Aehr]

does this actually happen with you? funny. it happens with me sometimes too! the exact same thing! Anyway.. nice poem, interesting and mysterious.

[Coyote Poetry]

A good flow of thoughts. I like the use of tears to move the reader to different places. I like the mystery left by the poem. Good to leave open endings. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem just amazing how it is. It's so emotional and sad, yet the words the words flow in my mind.
Thanks for sharing this amazing poem.
100/100

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love this. Crying is so hard to deal with, at least for me. This is straight from the soul. Great work, really excellent.

[deepblue04]

thanks!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

welcome :)

[The dark story]

I cry with the rain.
I don't want anyone
to see me like that.

i like this line the most....the way you expressed your feelings in this make it a remarkable piece of writing

good job!!!!!!

[deepblue04]

thanks

[An owl on the moon]

This is the fearful place many find themselves in... you've described it so well... that world of pain and darkness where one finds no relief... no escape... A painful read knowing too well of that place myself.

[Tai Ryens]

I know this feeling by heart. You should definitely continue to write to this piece; that is if you are actually longing to continue. If you feel the slightest bit of doubt, I would suggest not to force it, but if your mind urges you to write on, then do so.