Dragons

Dragons

A Poem by deepblue04

Mystical creatures

Flames roaring in their body

Waiting to come out

 

Scaly creatures

With rough skins

Just like a snake

 

Misunderstood creatures

Nobody knows their true nature

They are very territorial

That’s why they attack people

Just to protect their nest


 

© 2012 deepblue04


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The short sentences and concise wording makes for an easy to read poem. Dragons are mystical, subjects of mythology. However, the last two verses start to sound like a nature documentary. Komodo dragons are real and would match those verses. You might consider reducing the line number in the last verse to match the first two. Or not. Interesting poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


um well I like your writing and the information you include. I would only work on the flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wonderful, i love dragons!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how its informative and the topic on dragons is one of my favorites,nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A lovely poem about dragons. Very simple, yet perfectly summarized. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very good poem for Dragons. Their mystery allowed us to write and dream about powerful beast with few enemies. I like your description of a dragon. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome poem about dragons!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes. Like the color purple, or like the grim reaper, or a phoenix. people just don't understand. And they make false judgements. I love it Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


When I read this, I look past the literal and see people who are viewed as monsters hiding in the shadows. Like an insecurity but wanted to be accepted "waiting to come out." I like that I can read into this in my own way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem! I love dragons, and this is an amazing write on them.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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