It's a fun little poem. Put the sticky-note on the computer or television screen, they'll get it for sure. Unless it's teenaged boys, in which case you should put it on the refrigerator. You might consider changing the last line so as to match more closely the first two. For example, 'For others to see', or 'I'm messy, you see'. Something like that.
Oh. Literally pretty straight forward. Not what I expected. It seems unemotive. I'd try just 2 lines. Keep the first, but the 2nd could be 'cuz of her bloody body' I guess I like to be sinister in my work!
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