The beach

The beach

A Poem by deepblue04

The beach is so peaceful

Hearing the calming waves

Crashing on the water

 

I love the smell

The salty ocean smell

What an enjoyable place it is

 

I love swimming in the water

See all the shells and seaweed

On the floor

 

I love the beach houses

All the bright colors

Cream, blue, maroon, white

So many colors

 

The most enjoyable time on the beach

Is spending it with others

Laughing, playing, shouting to the sky

Beach is like a second home to me

© 2012 deepblue04


Author's Note

deepblue04
this one was made quickly, so it's not a really good one.

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The beach is my favorite place. Seem like a open beach allowed us to think and relax. I like the description and I agree with the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2012
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deepblue04
deepblue04

DeRidder, LA



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Hi! My name is Susan. I love reading and writing poetry! I will accept any friend request and will review any type of writing. I like to listen to k-pop/rock, rock. Blue is my favorite color. M.. more..

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