An Unexpected Friendship2

Chase

He is so beautiful,

I actually want him for myself

Claire shouldn't get him this time

 

He is so beautiful,

His eye is like the sea,

His hair has the perfect shade of dark brown

 

Claire, my friend,

Always get the boys first,

No matter what.

I don't have a choice,

nor does Shae.

 

I'm the only one of the popular group

That can keep a relationship for more than a week

None of them could go more for a few days

Before looking for someone else.

This usually scares people away,

because they are afraid of getting embarrased.

 

I hope I could get to Chase

Before Claire does

and let him know

that not all populars are the same.

 

                            Haley

                            8/30/2010

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description of the boy in the chapter. I like the need and the desire expressed in this chapter. A very good chapter.
Coyote

[Persona]

Are you telling a story through different POVs through poem-like verses?
THAT IS SO ORIGINAL! Also, this Chase dude must have great hair cuz they're all commenting on it!