Nothing from the typical

Nothing from the typical

A Poem by deepblue04

Pain was what I was growing up to

No kindness, no happiness

Just pain

 

Most people can’t comprehend my story

Only a rare do

It seems like a typical story

But to me,

It’s different from the rest

 

I get beat up

In home, at school, everywhere

I’m not a gang member

I’m not a fighter

I just take in the beating

 

I never deserved it

I did nothing wrong

I never gave the attitude

I never acted smart

 

Yet, why do people get mad at me?

Is there something wrong with me?

I just want everything to be good

I just want to live a good life

© 2012 deepblue04


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I feel this. This is deep. So honest, so raw, so... pure. Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent poetry, I sympathize with the main character of it, and hope things get better for her/him. Another excellent write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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deepblue04
deepblue04

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Hi! My name is Susan. I love reading and writing poetry! I will accept any friend request and will review any type of writing. I like to listen to k-pop/rock, rock. Blue is my favorite color. M.. more..

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