Masquerade

Do you notice me?

Can you notice me?

Have you notice me?

Will you notice me?

Because I want you to.

 

Masquerade

It's a masquerade we're having here

Can you tell that it's me under here?

Can you notice the beauty

That I have inside of me?

Masquerade

 

Your friends crowd you

I have a hard time

just to talk to you alone

 

I feel so out of place

around your friends

i wear my mask

and they get so cool with me

 

Masquerade

It's a masquerade we're having here

Can you tell that it's me under here?

Can you notice the beauty

That I have inside of me?

Masquerade

 

If you forget who I am

Without this mask

Then I guess my plan worked

 

Masquerade

It's a masquerade we're having here

Can you tell that it's me under here?

Can you notice the beauty

That I have inside of me?

Masquerade

 

I feel so scare

Just to take this mask off

I feel afraid

That you wouldn't like the true me

 

But one day I had the courage to

and you noticed me with a smile on your face

and a nod

 

Masquerade

It's a masquerade we're having here

Can you tell that it's me under here?

Can you notice the beauty

That I have inside of me?

Masquerade

 

Masquerade

It's a masquerade we're having here

Can you tell that it's me under here?

Can you notice the beauty

That I have inside of me?

Masquerade

 

Masquerade, Masquerade, Masquerade, Masquerade

Let me put on the mask

Hide myself and the shame

Of liking you this much

Masquerade

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

A poem of beauty it is . (￣^￣)ゞit speaks of many things and I like how you compared it all to a masquerade.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very nice comparisson. Excellent.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Oh its simplu lovely, I adore the thought of comparing the situation to a masquerade it makes it mysterious and interesting. Really nice.

[Owlgirl]

I love the repition you used and this is a lovely poem that everyone can find at least a little part to connect with. You may want to work on formatting and puntuation a little but that's an author's choice, and this is truly a gorgeous poem.