Blinded

tell me the truth

i need to know soon

before my mind controls my vision

i saw you

i know you're guilty

i just can't tell you in person

maybe something will happen

i am not sure

the future is so unpredictable

but i see you in mine

it might not be soon

it may be late

but it will come

i know it will

Reviews

[incensesmoke]

nice poem feel engaged in the emotions and dilemma of this. The poem uses the word "I" a lot, and I wonder if some of those could be taken out to give it a bit more flow... but none-the-less, great writing!