In Silence

 

How I longed for your love

How I longed for your kiss

I’m weakened by your sadness

Strengthened by your faith

Be it forbidden

But I’m yours forever

 

Need not say a word

‘Coz in your silence

I can still comprehend

One thing is certain

One thing is true

This girl’s undeniably damn in love with you

 

This serenade I shall play

This emblem I shall wear

As I whisper in the wind

The promise I had made

Whatever it takes to protect our vows

I’ll embrace it with a curse

 

Reviews

[holyspirit1]

i like you poems to well written and right to the heart

[b]

Amazing. Lucky be the one who is given such love. Emotionally its raw, and technically its well written. Needless to say, I enjoyed it and thought it was well thought out.

Give us more.

b

[Michael X]

This is passionate, heartfelt, and well written, you did a great job at capturing ideas of sentiment
and the need to care, a worthwhile reading, keep up the great work

[Ama May Cooper]

Painfully sweet ... leaves a sickly taste of pure pain in my mouth.
A well written piece write from teh heart
Yeah the title dosent so much fit but i cant think of one to suggest.. either way the work is amazing keep it up