when tears are the only cure for loneliness

I look around, it's black and white
Rubbed my eyes, but it's still the same
Trapped in a place unknown to me
As I can feel the cold numb wind

And once again, my tears provoked
My soul cried, my weakness revealed
I can hear me breathe, breathing too hard
Shattering the silence amidst

I can feel the time, moving slowly
Or it may be frozen in the darkness somewhere
A deep slumber must be all I need
Hoping that this is just a dream

And once I wake up, all this will fade
But it never turned out to be this way
I'm caught up in fantasy
But no one can save me from here

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Very well written
nice write, I enjoyed it

Orlando M

[Matsu_Glare13]

nice! :) you writing style is really good. This poem is great! Yep, i do agree. Tears are the only cure to lonliness. XD.

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship P..]

Very nice write, I can really relate my friend. I love this poem. it was a Wonderful read. I do hope more enjoy this as much as I did/do and I wish you the best.


S.D.Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY