Shadow

Shadow

A Poem by sunshinebear95

Leading behind your every move
Seeing your every step
Lying blackly against the earth's surface
So gently and creepy
Scaring up behind you
Watching
While doing what you do
During your every move
Living behind you as a mystery
When I look behind,
All I see is the mysterious me

© 2009 sunshinebear95


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Great metaphore in the first line while reminding the reader that at diff times the shadow can be in front or in back, I could see the speakers shadow. Really good. Thanks for sharing, Barb

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Added on April 13, 2009

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sunshinebear95
sunshinebear95

Danbury, CT



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Hi, I am Becky. Previously I had a few poems published in Creative with Words print magazine, Skipping Stones print magazine, and Teen Ink Online magazine. Currently, I will soon be submitting my fi.. more..

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