masquerade

masquerade

A Poem by A.H.

why does this world
comes across as a masquerade?

is everything we really see,
one and the same?
on the outside,
and, on the inside?

peel those layers of mascara
that you wear on your eyes,
undress to bare-bones,
and hang your mask on the side.

can't anymore fog my glasses
to turn heartfully half-blind
and be a two-eyed naive
with two-hands tied.

stay low and guard yourself;
the truth could be a half-lie,
two plus two a concealed five,
this is a wild-wide world,
it's either believe or make-believe.

pretenses that dance around
will fall through the facade
once the fragrance of trust
wears off.  

- AH, 02/11/2025

© 2025 A.H.


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I am in amazement that every part of this poem is so meaningful. I can think for at least half an hour for each sentence. I feel the sadness that this fraud of the world can make you write something so powerful and sincere, what could you have experienced to write so well?

I loved it my friend. Now I will explain my feelings one by one.

"why does this world
(...)
and, on the inside?"

I thought you were going to talk about something like Matrix in the first part, like a simulation theory. Is this place real, are we real, are they real?

"peel those layers of mascara
(...)
with two-hands tied."

This part is a perfect piece that tells that people are not really what they seem. In every sense. Everyone created an identity in the outside world, real masks (dirty masks). I am devastated
Especially the phrase "*heartfully half-blind*" here is very clever. It really affected me. People put masks not only on their faces but also on their hearts.

"stay low and guard yourself;
(...)
it's either believe or make-believe."

a very powerful part, really deep, especially two plus two and the last stanza. I believe I felt and took everything you wanted to say to my heart, but I'm not advanced enough in English to be able to tell you. I will say that this part left me speechless.

the last part gave me hope, after all, they can deceive to some extent, can't they, I think death will drop all masks and everyone will fall to the ground. what makes me think here is this: if we fall on the same front, we may not see their masks fall.

I loved your poem, I applaud it. I want to hang it on billboards. I LOVED IT WITH ALL MY SINCERITY.
in favs.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Dear Beren, this is such a lovely review my sweet friend, you're very kind in your words. I'm so gla.. read more
Beren

1 Month Ago

I was going to visit this poem again because the two plus two equals five part reminded me of a song.. read more
A.H.

1 Month Ago

Haven't heard this song before - (logical-olivia rodrigo). just looked up now and listened to it. Ly.. read more



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Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Thomas for reading and sharing your thoughts on this write.
I do think the fault lies behind the facades people wear like a mask, as they slowly start to believe it and then the trusted become the victims of their deceit.
Being honest is now seen as a weakness, but it shouldn't make the real you change because others can't see it through their own cynical eyes.
If we don't have trust, then what are we left with? Just a bunch of pretenders pretending that they care!
Life does indeed feel like a masquerade sometimes.
Nicely penned.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you Lorry for reading. I really appreciate you sharing those thoughts on this write.
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We all wear masks. Metaphorically speaking, perhaps it's because we are alone, awash in a sea of humanity, and we are not keeping up meaningful connections with each other.

I read this yesterday and your words stayed with me. I found myself in the studio last night and this morning because your words fueled a selection of colours that I’ve spread across a canvas, because I’m still processing how we got to this point and your verse has demanded attention. Thank you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Thank you for sharing those perspectives. I'm glad to hear this write made an impression and that's .. read more
Isn’t that quite the slice of revelation! Loved the symbolism of mascara and that image projection. Quite deep in parallel to a surface level (non-issue) reality 🙏🏻🕊️

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Thank you for those thoughts, Fred. I really appreciate it.
redd Brick Keshner

1 Month Ago

Most welcome 🙏🏻🕊
Freds.
Hello A.H. This hit me hard even though I've deleted my account due to such fakery here and everywhere, I, also have used many masks. Life gets boring. We do stuff.
My main reason for signing back in... You look amazing.
(yeah, I know but your chosen profile is awesome. have a great day. Now, back to the shadows ;-)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

I'm sad to hear that you deleted the account, hope you're doing okay. whenever you find a chance, pl.. read more
ETERNITY

1 Month Ago

Like the wayward beggar searching for scraps, I return to the tables of my delight. Just reading thi.. read more
A.H.

1 Month Ago

you have a way with words. thank you for stopping by and sharing, GlendaK. I appreciate it.
"Perception is reality." -Lee Atwater
"illusion is Reality." -Ernest Becker
"I think we all visually see the same thing, just different parts of it." -Me😎haha

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Thank you Dylan for reading and sharing your perspectives.
"The fragrance of trust"....great phrase. Without trust, there is no fragrance. Many people wear a mask and the real person is hidden neath a mask of makeup or smiles. Reminds me of a song from long ago, "smiling faces, sometimes they don't tell the truth." You have expressed honest emotions in every line of this poem, A.H.. Much enjoyed. Lydi**

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Thank you Lydia for this review. I appreciate your thoughts and perspectives on this write. Have a w.. read more
Amazing A.H. i am finding hard to review this write for yes, nothing is often as it seems we perceive something and know it for years and then it unfolds itself as something else..best to not entirely believe your own eyes. Wear a mask for your own protection then no-one knows who you really are .

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

that you're right too, in a way. wear a mask for your protection, (guard yourself) but that leads to.. read more
This is great Writing A.H. - complex and resonant. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Thank you much red ! I'm glad to hear your thoughts on this write. I appreciate you stopping by to r.. read more
Very well written, very deliberate, and a very poignant observation. Sometimes those masks are the only thing keeping us sane.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Month Ago

Those are wonderful perspectives. Agree, sometimes those masks may keep us sane when you can't ascer.. read more

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