Among the stars

It's a day filled with snow,

very dreamy, all rinsed in white glow.

A lazy day, nothing interesting today,

but I want to pen my mind away. 

the sky dusked, and the night on its way,

it's the close of another day,

yet there is lots to say.

I can feel the wind on my cheeks,

music notes and life beats,

thoughts meeting at my streets,

dancing away in those evening greets,

they tell me, count to three,

make a wish and see.

Tonight, be among the stars,

savour and collect memoirs,

remember to shine bright,

and hold this thought tight. 

- AH, 12/23/2024

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

"rinsed in white glow" such graphic beauty and exactly how the beauty of a snowy day reflects.
Ahhhh, A.H., the feeling of being driven outweighs the lazy day, right? Driven to write about something, anything, the beauty of snowflakes, the incredible sadness of pollution. See? I view it from the opposite end. ANYHOO, I love this piece. It's like you. Awesome. xo G

[A.H.]

Snowy days are delightful, the scene all around is so sparkling white and bright. Thank you Glenda, for sharing your wonderful thoughts on this write. Really appreciate it!

[Beren]

Tomorrow is the first day of spring and I still feel this way. Sometimes I love some thoughts and those moments and thoughts where the brain wants to stop and stay in that moment. It feels like that thought will never go away. I think the brain goes out of control when I'm happy and for some reason this poem made me think of that.
"Tonight, be among the stars,
savour and collect memoirs,
remember to shine bright,
and hold this thought tight. " CLEVER

[A.H.]

Yeah, almost end of winter here too. Spring will arrive soon now and I can't wait to see the flowers :) But, yes snow and winter was beautiful. This poem was like some thoughts on an evening when it snowed and I wanted to stay in that moment and freeze that forever. the poem happened :) Thanks for reading and sharing what you thought. Always, glad to hear you, Beren.

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah yes, writing is a delight when the writer is in the Zone. It's almost like the words write themselves, and all we can do is play Catch Up.
...bye the way, I really enjoyed your write AH! :)

[A.H.]

Thank you Dylan, I'm glad you enjoyed this write :)

[Writergurl]

I dislike coldness, this is wonderful. '
like your imagery. Nicely written

[A.H.]

Thanks so much for stopping by and the review, Writergurl.

[Ashi written tale & poe..]

Awesome nicely written I like your poem.

[A.H.]

Thank you for the visit Ashi and glad to hear you liked the poem.

[poetgurl]

We just had a foot a snow 2 days ago, and now were getting ready to get more tonight and tomorrow.
I am ready for summer. This is a nicely written write, love the imagery

[A.H.]

haha, I can relate to it. snow is good but not for too long ;) summers are brighter and warmer. thanks for stopping by and the review. Appreciate it very!

[Chris Shaw]

I enjoyed your poetic expression here Abhilash. Nice imagery created as well. Thank you for posting.

Chris

[A.H.]

Thank you Chris for the visit and the wonderful review. Appreciate it!

[Chris Shaw]

You are very welcome.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

[A.H.]

Thank you Thomas.

[red93]

I like this AH, it has the basis of something really interesting. But I would like to see a Free Verse version, where the rhymes are not dictating the sense and direction of the Poem. Still a decent effort though.

[A.H.]

Thank you red93 for the review and your thoughts. Appreciate it!

[red93]

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[Shreya Dixit]

This poem feels like a gentle snowfall soothing and calming. It's adorable the way you wove together nature,hope and magic.Really liked it.

[A.H.]

Thank you Shreya. Glad to know you liked the theme and the poem :)