Among the stars

It's a day filled with snow,

very dreamy, all rinsed in white glow.

A lazy day, nothing interesting today,

but I want to pen my mind away. 

the sky dusked, and the night on its way,

it's the close of another day,

yet there is lots to say.

I can feel the wind on my cheeks,

music notes and life beats,

thoughts meeting at my streets,

dancing away in those evening greets,

they tell me, count to three,

make a wish and see.

Tonight, be among the stars,

savour and collect memoirs,

remember to shine bright,

and hold this thought tight. 

- AH, 12/23/2024

Reviews

[Ashi written tale & poe..]

Awesome nicely written I like your poem.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thank you for the visit Ashi and glad to hear you liked the poem.

[poetgurl]

We just had a foot a snow 2 days ago, and now were getting ready to get more tonight and tomorrow.
I am ready for summer. This is a nicely written write, love the imagery

[Abhilash Hegde]

haha, I can relate to it. snow is good but not for too long ;) summers are brighter and warmer. thanks for stopping by and the review. Appreciate it very!

[Chris Shaw]

I enjoyed your poetic expression here Abhilash. Nice imagery created as well. Thank you for posting.

Chris

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thank you Chris for the visit and the wonderful review. Appreciate it!

[Chris Shaw]

You are very welcome.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thank you Thomas.

[red93]

I like this AH, it has the basis of something really interesting. But I would like to see a Free Verse version, where the rhymes are not dictating the sense and direction of the Poem. Still a decent effort though.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thank you red93 for the review and your thoughts. Appreciate it!

[red93]

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[Shreya Dixit]

This poem feels like a gentle snowfall soothing and calming. It's adorable the way you wove together nature,hope and magic.Really liked it.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thank you Shreya. Glad to know you liked the theme and the poem :)