The auburn titter of the fresh maple leaves that turned the wind south, waited all along under the sun to catch a glimpse of her pearl lit smile that silenced the time.
The astral glow of the shivering crescent moon that mirrored a million hearts, skipped a heartbeat when her silver bathed anklets jingled to jive a thousand notes of music.
The piercing incense of the white morning mist that concealed its shimmering eyes, woke up to see her, letting the silks of black hair that swirled in air to kiss the light of the day.
The meandering ripples of the river down the valley that hunted the nature in verve, took down a bow in reverence of her presence to tear open the sky all blue.
The visual detail is absolutely captivating in this eloquently penned poem, Abhi. Excellent use of metaphor, personification and other figures of speech. A glowing tribute to Autumn, to the Harvest Moon and to nature. Wondrous inking! A joy to read. I love the title too! Gratitude for sharing your beautiful work, Abhi...
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4 Months Ago
Thank you such a encouraging and thoughtful review of my write. Btw to add, this write was in apprec.. read moreThank you such a encouraging and thoughtful review of my write. Btw to add, this write was in appreciation of the beauty and nature. expressions are the most attractive ornaments of being beautiful. Appreciate your visit, Marie.
4 Months Ago
Most welcome always, Abhi. You captured the beauty of nature exquisitely and how deeply you apprecia.. read moreMost welcome always, Abhi. You captured the beauty of nature exquisitely and how deeply you appreciate and love it is interwoven in the words of this most beautiful poem. Thank you again for sharing, Abhi...
You bring nature to life in this stunning, romantic metaphoric poem...you seem to catch dwellers of the cosmos in a rhythmic, visual way.... as they live quietly together in a symbiotic universe....your words speak of sensuality in a dream-like world....since you subtly mention flowing black hair" to kiss the light of day"
"her pearl lit smile".....a very well crafted piece....
Warmly, B
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4 Months Ago
Thank you for the wonderful review Betty. I'm glad you liked the poem. This dreamy-like world piece .. read moreThank you for the wonderful review Betty. I'm glad you liked the poem. This dreamy-like world piece is the celebration of a beauty of woman. I tried to weave a picture of how nature may appreciate the beauty of a woman. Thank you for reading.
Emotions of a teenager well painted. It's time craving for love and affection. Nicely written poem 😁
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Btw, I was in mid twenties when I wrote this, hehe. Woman and Nature, their beauty needs to eb celeb.. read moreBtw, I was in mid twenties when I wrote this, hehe. Woman and Nature, their beauty needs to eb celebrated. Thanks for visiting, dear TP.
The visual detail is absolutely captivating in this eloquently penned poem, Abhi. Excellent use of metaphor, personification and other figures of speech. A glowing tribute to Autumn, to the Harvest Moon and to nature. Wondrous inking! A joy to read. I love the title too! Gratitude for sharing your beautiful work, Abhi...
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
Thank you such a encouraging and thoughtful review of my write. Btw to add, this write was in apprec.. read moreThank you such a encouraging and thoughtful review of my write. Btw to add, this write was in appreciation of the beauty and nature. expressions are the most attractive ornaments of being beautiful. Appreciate your visit, Marie.
4 Months Ago
Most welcome always, Abhi. You captured the beauty of nature exquisitely and how deeply you apprecia.. read moreMost welcome always, Abhi. You captured the beauty of nature exquisitely and how deeply you appreciate and love it is interwoven in the words of this most beautiful poem. Thank you again for sharing, Abhi...