this is for you

this is for you my lady love tonight,
your twinkle eyes ignite,
I can't stop but write.

you walk up to the door,
those lilly's you wore,
your killing smile I adore.

you look stunning in the white dress,
I may be shy to confess,
hey, I won't say this unless,
you know, my heart fails to express.

today is the second of August,
let me be totally honest,
you're so pretty, gorgeous and modest.

you are a woman of grace,
always in my headspace,
just that you know in case.

there are days you are uptight,
gearing up for a real fight
but you shine so bright
that I forget all my might.

many times we doublethink
when our lives are rock pink
but I'll always be there as a heat sink.

this is for you my lady love tonight,
my love for you is sealed airtight.

- AH, 08/02/2024

Reviews

[Marie]

Wow! Your love for your adored lady love shines resplendently throughout this whole wonderful romantic, tender, warm, sweet poem which I adore, Abhi. Oh, true love! How pure! I love this poem and thank you for writing and sharing it, Abhi. A romantic gem with never ending love so finely expressed!

[A.H.]

Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts on this write and those kind words. It's great to hear how the poem felt to you like. Many times we forget, fail or miss to express how we feel and what the significant other means to you in a relationship. I tried to put forth that in this write. Thanks much Marie for this thoughtful and encouraging review. Appreciate It! Best, Abhi

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Abhi... Best to you too...

[Stella Armour]

i like the end rhyming scheme, and a lovely romantic tribute to your special lady ..

Stella

[A.H.]

I'm glad to hear that. Thank you Stella.

[Writergurl]

WOW, Love your remarkable poetic skills,
This is quite a piece here, I really enjoyed this write.

[A.H.]

Thank you for those kind words and the review, Writergurl. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this one.

[Beren Ongur]

aww our sweet "what would i do"s poet is a romantic lover and i loved it. i can forgive you now :D and i hope you always live love in the most fun way, show your feelings to the lucky woman often

[A.H.]

haha thanks so much. yes, expressing what you feel in a relationship is as important as the relationship. happy to hear you loved the poem. thanks for reading and reviewing.

[hayzed]

with an expression like this .. she's indeed a woman of grace
so wonderfully penned..

-hayzed

[A.H.]

yes she is.. thank you much H for the review !

[Amy R]

Oh my, what a lovely poem, the way you describe her says a lot,.
I adored this poem.

"this is for you my lady love tonight,
my love for you is sealed airtight." u got me with these lines.. very sweet

-Amy

[A.H.]

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts on this write. Appreciate your kind review Amy.

[Amy R]

You're very welcome! 😊

[John the Baptist]

I would say this lady is somewhat special. When you find one like this, you really don'w want to let her go. They just don't show up every day.

[A.H.]

Right, she's very special and not letting her go anywhere :) Thanks for reading, John.

[Soren]

I could hear the infatuation for another in this poem of rhyme. Nicely expressed those things valued and devotion. A pledge of love nicely stated.

[A.H.]

Thank you Soren for reading and reviewing the write. Appreciate it!

[Lydia Shutter]

Romantic and sweet, your words describe the perfect union of two who love one another. I am sure the one this is meant for will cherish your words. Lydi***

[A.H.]

Thank you Lydia for the review and sharing your wonderful thoughts.

[Arundass TP]

You have drawn great moments in life with a lady. Nicely written poem 😄

[A.H.]

Thank you, dear friend TP.

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊

[LVW]

aaaah the beautiful love of a man for a woman. beautifully captured.

[A.H.]

Thank you LVM.