this is for you

this is for you

A Poem by A.H.

this is for you my lady love tonight,
your twinkle eyes ignite,
I can't stop but write.

you walk up to the door,
those lilly's you wore,
your killing smile I adore.

you look stunning in the white dress,
I may be shy to confess,
hey, I won't say this unless,
you know, my heart fails to express.

today is the second of August,
let me be totally honest,
you're so pretty, gorgeous and modest.

you are a woman of grace,
always in my headspace,
just that you know in case.

there are days you are uptight,
gearing up for a real fight
but you shine so bright
that I forget all my might.

many times we doublethink
when our lives are rock pink
but I'll always be there as a heat sink.

this is for you my lady love tonight,
my love for you is sealed airtight.

- AH, 08/02/2024

© 2024 A.H.


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Wow! Your love for your adored lady love shines resplendently throughout this whole wonderful romantic, tender, warm, sweet poem which I adore, Abhi. Oh, true love! How pure! I love this poem and thank you for writing and sharing it, Abhi. A romantic gem with never ending love so finely expressed!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts on this write and those kind words. It's great to hear.. read more
Marie

5 Months Ago

Most welcome always, Abhi... Best to you too...



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WOW, Love your remarkable poetic skills,
This is quite a piece here, I really enjoyed this write.


Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

1 Day Ago

Thank you for those kind words and the review, Writergurl. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this one.
aww our sweet "what would i do"s poet is a romantic lover and i loved it. i can forgive you now :D and i hope you always live love in the most fun way, show your feelings to the lucky woman often

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

haha thanks so much. yes, expressing what you feel in a relationship is as important as the relation.. read more
with an expression like this .. she's indeed a woman of grace
so wonderfully penned..

-hayzed

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

yes she is.. thank you much H for the review !
Oh my, what a lovely poem, the way you describe her says a lot,.
I adored this poem.

"this is for you my lady love tonight,
my love for you is sealed airtight." u got me with these lines.. very sweet

-Amy

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts on this write. Appreciate your kind review Amy.
Amy R

5 Months Ago

You're very welcome! 😊
I would say this lady is somewhat special. When you find one like this, you really don'w want to let her go. They just don't show up every day.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Right, she's very special and not letting her go anywhere :) Thanks for reading, John.
I could hear the infatuation for another in this poem of rhyme. Nicely expressed those things valued and devotion. A pledge of love nicely stated.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you Soren for reading and reviewing the write. Appreciate it!
Romantic and sweet, your words describe the perfect union of two who love one another. I am sure the one this is meant for will cherish your words. Lydi***

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you Lydia for the review and sharing your wonderful thoughts.
You have drawn great moments in life with a lady. Nicely written poem 😄

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you, dear friend TP.
Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Welcome friend 😊
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LVW
aaaah the beautiful love of a man for a woman. beautifully captured.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you LVM.
Most romantic lines ... I hope she answers your heart's call ...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.H.

5 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Marvin and leaving a review.

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