What wisdom you have imparted to your reader in this truly wondrously penned poem, Abhi. What excellent advice you give to your reader, each stanza is a gem for creating a better way of life than the one a person presently has. I love the repetition of the final line of the first verse in each of the following verses. It brings home to the reader that we are what we are because of what we make of life, because of the choices we've made. We have to play the cards which life deals to us and the choices of what cards we keep close to our chest and the choices of what cards we lay down, are ours alone to make and the life we live will be the result of those choices. A very stimulating/motivational write Abhi. Your words inspire your reader to take stock of themselves, to change and become the person they were always meant to be. Kudos on this superbly penned poem! It will help in no small way those who read it and take note of your words. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing, Abhi...
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
So glad to read your thoughts and thank you so much for reading and reviewing this write. Sort of a .. read moreSo glad to read your thoughts and thank you so much for reading and reviewing this write. Sort of a write to remind myself we have all it takes to be what we want to be. Just need that belief and will to achieve. Thanks Marie !
What wisdom you have imparted to your reader in this truly wondrously penned poem, Abhi. What excellent advice you give to your reader, each stanza is a gem for creating a better way of life than the one a person presently has. I love the repetition of the final line of the first verse in each of the following verses. It brings home to the reader that we are what we are because of what we make of life, because of the choices we've made. We have to play the cards which life deals to us and the choices of what cards we keep close to our chest and the choices of what cards we lay down, are ours alone to make and the life we live will be the result of those choices. A very stimulating/motivational write Abhi. Your words inspire your reader to take stock of themselves, to change and become the person they were always meant to be. Kudos on this superbly penned poem! It will help in no small way those who read it and take note of your words. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing, Abhi...
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Months Ago
So glad to read your thoughts and thank you so much for reading and reviewing this write. Sort of a .. read moreSo glad to read your thoughts and thank you so much for reading and reviewing this write. Sort of a write to remind myself we have all it takes to be what we want to be. Just need that belief and will to achieve. Thanks Marie !