What a beautiful poem, Abhi. Lovely, warm, sweet, innocent stages within the poem. Mama takes the greatest good care of her treasured baby boy, sings to soothe him and help him sleep. We miss Mama as we grow up and the times with her, which are beautifully inked her, but life demands that we grow up and become parents ourselves to our own precious little darlings, it's the circle of life. I love this poem, Abhi and I love the soul touching imagery within the poem. It is so true that innocence in childhood is a gift and it is why it is such a dreadful thing when that innocence is taken away by adults. It is the worst crime of all because the child is forced to relive it in memory for the rest of their lives. Sorry for going off on a tangent there, please forgive me, Abhi... Your poem is truly delightful! Thank you so very much for sharing...
Posted 4 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you Marie for the warm and delightful review. There's nothing like the unconditional love of a.. read moreThank you Marie for the warm and delightful review. There's nothing like the unconditional love of a mother towards her child. It's the most purest form of love. Childhood, innocence and the adulthood, all part of our lives :) Thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts, warm wishes, Abhi.
3 Months Ago
Most welcome always, Abhi. Wishing you a wonderful day and a very lovely weekend too...
What a beautiful poem, Abhi. Lovely, warm, sweet, innocent stages within the poem. Mama takes the greatest good care of her treasured baby boy, sings to soothe him and help him sleep. We miss Mama as we grow up and the times with her, which are beautifully inked her, but life demands that we grow up and become parents ourselves to our own precious little darlings, it's the circle of life. I love this poem, Abhi and I love the soul touching imagery within the poem. It is so true that innocence in childhood is a gift and it is why it is such a dreadful thing when that innocence is taken away by adults. It is the worst crime of all because the child is forced to relive it in memory for the rest of their lives. Sorry for going off on a tangent there, please forgive me, Abhi... Your poem is truly delightful! Thank you so very much for sharing...
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Thank you Marie for the warm and delightful review. There's nothing like the unconditional love of a.. read moreThank you Marie for the warm and delightful review. There's nothing like the unconditional love of a mother towards her child. It's the most purest form of love. Childhood, innocence and the adulthood, all part of our lives :) Thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts, warm wishes, Abhi.
3 Months Ago
Most welcome always, Abhi. Wishing you a wonderful day and a very lovely weekend too...
Beautiful poem Abhilash! I really enjoyed the imagery. Such sweet scenes. And the message was clear and easy to relate to. Oh to be innocent again!
Well done. :) Stay inspired!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I'm so glad you could relate to it.
There's nothing like innocence and the childhood :) .. read moreI'm so glad you could relate to it.
There's nothing like innocence and the childhood :)
Thanks so much, Andronicus.. for dropping by and sharing your thoughts!