Of her charming ways

Of her dulcet voice

in those green meadows,

of the little butterflies like

she spread her arms

to sweep those

innocent ripples 

of my eyes.

Of the roaring seas

in those jazzy waves,

she galloped

bare foot with a torch

of dangling flames

setting the sun

in her eyes.

Of the scent of jasmine

and the shine of silk,

she broke 

the defences of me

and touched me

of her soft milky shin.

Of the carpet of blue sky

and the wings of clouds

she twined my wrist

in her moon eyed bracelet

like a fairy of edens

unto the gates of paradise. 

10 Oct 2007, by Abhilash Hegde

Reviews

[Philip Muls]

She broke your defences, sounds familiar to every man alive.

Well done.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Hahaha, yeah. I like the way you put it!
Thanks for dropping by Philip.
I'm glad, you gave this one a read :)

[Woody]

I'll echo Sam. you're quite the romantic, Abhilash. very nicely put.
just one word puzzled me: shin? did you mean shin? chin?

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thanks woody1 As always, you are kind with your words :)
Yeah, I meant the shin (lower part of the leg) ..

[Woody]

ok gotcha! seemed strange, that's all.

[Abhilash Hegde]

isn't it more sensuous to be fondled and caressed of shin :P
may be my imagination runs a bit wild, lol!

[Woody]

no, thing is that it wouldn't occur to me to talk about my beloved's shin, elbow, knuckles, shoulder blade... see what I mean. usually, it's eyes, lashes....... so your choice took me by surprise. it's original. you're the boss :)

[Abhilash Hegde]

woody, you always have a way to put in your words- elbow, knuckles, shoulder blade ... that was funny! hahaha.. I got some laughs out of it!
:D

[Woody]

haha I meant to make you smile :)

[Samuel Dickens]

My, my, my, Abhilash, as evidenced by these words, you certainly are a romantic. Is it fair that a girl may capture us so?

[Abhilash Hegde]

Hahaha.. that's very humbling to hear, Sam :)
Yeah, I'm romantic at heart, well! most of us are..
Aren't we ? ;)
Thanks so much, for stopping by!