If I were...

If I were...

A Poem by Abhilash Hegde
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an old silly write, brought it back from my stash :)

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If I were to be a Teacher
I could skip homework
And play with the cane.

If I were to be a Doctor
I could scribble
And accept fat paychecks.

If I were to be a Banker
I didn't have to learn science
To make money.

If I were to be a Lawyer
I could always lie
And get away.

If I were to be an Architect
I would have drawn
My luxuries with
Pencil,paper and scale.

If I were to be a Bartender
I needn't pay for
The silly drink.

If I were to be an Archeologist
I would have been rich
Digging up my past.

If I were to be an Engineer
I would have turned
Math into material
And material into Money.

But I'm a Poet.
I write,write and write,
Until I feel
The pulse of thoughts.

God, am I displaced?

14 July 2007, by Abhilash Hegde

© 2016 Abhilash Hegde


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Ha the if I were scenario ^^ I wonder how many times I have thought on the lines of "if something.." I guess that's how my mind ends up floating across so many thoughts and so many possibilities, makes me wonder what if.... a lot of times. A very lovely write. The structure throughout the poem is maintained and the flow thus very smooth. And I love what you have mentioned here. True words, some harsh, some to be taken with a grain of salt and some to just enjoy and laugh throughout. ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^ Because sometimes what we feel is silly can truly be something great. ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhilash Hegde

8 Years Ago

Thanks Errenn for dropping by :)
I wrote this in a lighter vein. I just thought of having a f.. read more



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What I'm reading: It's all about making money and/or gathering material riches . . . as tho being a poet is a lowly profession, by contrast. I notice many of the professions you describe include some aspect of dishonesty or unfairness in how riches are gathered. Or, in effect, everyone who's out there making money is doing so by cheating somewhat. Many without riches are of this opinion, so your message reflects an authentic viewpoint. However, to me, it feels like an unfair bias toward those who've worked their way to a rewarding career. Your poem is well-written with clarity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhilash Hegde

8 Years Ago

Barleygirl, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts.
Btw, I'm a Software Engineer by professio.. read more
Ha the if I were scenario ^^ I wonder how many times I have thought on the lines of "if something.." I guess that's how my mind ends up floating across so many thoughts and so many possibilities, makes me wonder what if.... a lot of times. A very lovely write. The structure throughout the poem is maintained and the flow thus very smooth. And I love what you have mentioned here. True words, some harsh, some to be taken with a grain of salt and some to just enjoy and laugh throughout. ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^ Because sometimes what we feel is silly can truly be something great. ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhilash Hegde

8 Years Ago

Thanks Errenn for dropping by :)
I wrote this in a lighter vein. I just thought of having a f.. read more

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