Ha the if I were scenario ^^ I wonder how many times I have thought on the lines of "if something.." I guess that's how my mind ends up floating across so many thoughts and so many possibilities, makes me wonder what if.... a lot of times. A very lovely write. The structure throughout the poem is maintained and the flow thus very smooth. And I love what you have mentioned here. True words, some harsh, some to be taken with a grain of salt and some to just enjoy and laugh throughout. ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^ Because sometimes what we feel is silly can truly be something great. ^^
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Errenn for dropping by :)
I wrote this in a lighter vein. I just thought of having a f.. read moreThanks Errenn for dropping by :)
I wrote this in a lighter vein. I just thought of having a fun take on what "If I were, this and that.. blah blah" ... Hahaha, nothing more than. I'm glad you liked it :)
What I'm reading: It's all about making money and/or gathering material riches . . . as tho being a poet is a lowly profession, by contrast. I notice many of the professions you describe include some aspect of dishonesty or unfairness in how riches are gathered. Or, in effect, everyone who's out there making money is doing so by cheating somewhat. Many without riches are of this opinion, so your message reflects an authentic viewpoint. However, to me, it feels like an unfair bias toward those who've worked their way to a rewarding career. Your poem is well-written with clarity.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Barleygirl, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts.
Btw, I'm a Software Engineer by professio.. read moreBarleygirl, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts.
Btw, I'm a Software Engineer by profession. So, that is what I do to make my living :D
This was actually, no serious write. One fine day, I was sitting all idle and thought of having some fun imagining "If I were..." haha :P
Well! my intent in the write was not to demean any profession or the people who work their way up hard. It was all just but, seeing the lighter side of things.
I'm glad you stopped by :)
Ha the if I were scenario ^^ I wonder how many times I have thought on the lines of "if something.." I guess that's how my mind ends up floating across so many thoughts and so many possibilities, makes me wonder what if.... a lot of times. A very lovely write. The structure throughout the poem is maintained and the flow thus very smooth. And I love what you have mentioned here. True words, some harsh, some to be taken with a grain of salt and some to just enjoy and laugh throughout. ^^ Thank you for sharing ^^ Because sometimes what we feel is silly can truly be something great. ^^
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Errenn for dropping by :)
I wrote this in a lighter vein. I just thought of having a f.. read moreThanks Errenn for dropping by :)
I wrote this in a lighter vein. I just thought of having a fun take on what "If I were, this and that.. blah blah" ... Hahaha, nothing more than. I'm glad you liked it :)