Resonance

Nature-at-its-best, describing an early morning scene.. the harmony that exists around us that we miss to notice.

The cerise eyed sun 

peeped through the high rise sky,

lighting the chilling dawn

in an aura of majestic colors.

The Sunflowers came alive

with golden dimples,

greeting the daybreak

with morning yawns and

effervescent smiles.

The lazy dew drops

one by one

dribbled along the grass blades

until they seeped

down the belly of earth.

The singing sparrows

swarmed across the skyline

in vibrant verves,

chirping a note

of million words.

The winds from far away

ran amok in mirth

as the rain 

and the weathercock

got to play. 

04 Sep 2008, by Abhilash Hegde 

Author's Note

Comments, Critiques, Thoughts.. all welcome.
Please stop by and would really appreciate your views on this write!
Thanks.

Reviews

[Woody]

hey Abhilash. I like this tableau you painted with your words. I could see with my mind's eye the minute details of nature rising from its slumber.
I'm no poet, as you may have gathered, but I felt this as beautiful prose rather than verse. but wait for the opinion of other reviewers.

[Abhilash Hegde]

Thanks so much Woody, for sharing your views on this write.
Appreciate you stopping by my friend.
I tried the free-verse form for this write and glad to hear that the write invoked visual images.
And, your observation on the write is indeed very insightful and helpful for me as a writer. Thanks for sharing! Btw, you are very modest to say you are no poet, he he :D

Definitely, I'm awaiting to hear from other folks in the community and would be great to know what they of it, too.
:)