right song

right song

A Poem by keith
"

shame too few felt the message

"
right song
shame too few felt the message

'what's that sound everybody look what's going down'








time past
for learning the message
time is not on our side
neither side
the message must be 

known                       understood                        felt

is this bye bye liberties and choice
see ya constitutional civil rights
guaranteed   protected
our lives have been maneuvered   

this day            this morn

to 

unknown                                                        uncharted 
legal territories


too late to switch 

why would we
we 've always been
caught in the middle
between 


nothing                  absolutely nothing


standing upon razors edge
well within the jaws of extremis

we the people are now officially

servants

to the king once again


supreme is omnipotent

we are not


exercise our right to free and fair elections 
without government interference
register to vote    go vote




@tiffsaver
4 years ago

Many, many people believe that this song was written for the Vietnam War... but it wasn't.  It was describing a street demonstration in Hollywood in 1966 when teenagers were protesting police brutality, cops throwing kids in jail just for being out after 10PM.  
How do I know that??  

BECAUSE I WAS ONE OF THEM.




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our freedoms are on the line

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Wow! A very informative write with a very interesting, eye-catching layout! Thank you for sharing, Keith.
I had a Windows 11 update on Sunday evening which caused a lot of problems for me, including deleting all of my passwords. I was unable to create a new password for this site as they didn't send me a link to do so on my own email address but on a temporary email which I could not access and the only way back was to create a new email address and a new account, which I did just a little while ago. Hope you are well, Keith. Love your spirit so finely displayed within this lovely poem. Thank you again for sharing...

Posted 4 Months Ago


keith

4 Months Ago

i'm trying
your visit is more than welcome
Mariej

4 Months Ago

That's all one can do, Keith. Thank you for your kind words...

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